I’ve been looking for the scripts, ‘Love of a Bullet’ and ‘The Big Hit’ online. Those are the two other scripts Ben Ramsey has written. I can’t find those scripts ANYWHERE. If anyone can find them, please post a link in your comment. You can usually tell a writer by their writing, especially when they’re either really good, or really bad which is the case with Ben Ramsey “I think.” This won’t really give us any further Dragonball movie news, but it will tell us curious few if it is truly a fan script or if we should stay away from anything else Ben Ramsey writes.

If you have trouble finding those other scripts it’s probably because no script site cares about them. OR, on a more romanticized note, maybe Ben Ramsey is a computer hacker and erased all of his previous scripts from the internet when his Dragonball draft leaked, so that people would think it was some die-hard fan who wrote it and not him. Personally I want to believe the latter, but logically I think its that no one cares about his writing.

But if anyone cares to make this connection go for it. If you think I’m crazy, then I’m crazy. I’ll still search in my free time, which isn’t much, so I need YOU (not trying to be Uncle Sam or anything) to prevent forest fires… Damnit! I’m all mixed up now. Just, if you’re interested this might just solve the puzzle.

This script is too much like star wars, and I don’t like that. Star wars is a good movie, but I don’t want other movies biting off of it thinking it would make them good.

oh well. this isnt the real script anyway.

….but out of sheer curiosity I had to go back and read it….

And thank god its fake. Bulma should cuss like a sailor, yes…. but not every other word. It was a bit rediculous. And where was Goku’s naive love of life and driven sense of adventure purely for the sake of good!? He was so pent up and angry.

And did anyone else catch the rediculousness of Yamcha’s joining of the team? He speaks two scentences with these strangers after getting his ass Kicked by Goku, and is ready to join their team?

I’m a writer myself, and I am fully confident that I have written many scripts that far surpass this one… I’m just amazed that if this IS a draft (which I believe it is), that it was even looked upon and considered professional material! Good lord…

The only thing that gave me hope from this “script” was the Krillin cameo. I hope they’ve retained that within the newer drafts….